He had let me know time after time that he was a thinking man,
a man of intellect and wit.
Yet one unintended hungry look into my eyes
and he betrayed each of his words he had carefully spoken to me.
I knew it in that instant.
He was a viscerally driven man.
And one day,
he would possess me.
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The charm of erotica and romance….
Mmmmm so good
wellll written.
Oh Coco, don’t be fooled by his surface good looks. You deserve…
a man of passion and substance
a man who gives good foot rubs
a man who loves chocolate
Forget that flimflam grub
chuck him out like yesterday’s newspaper
Besides, I think his mother dresses him; I mean, look at the size of the buttonhole he is wearing
Not to fear I shall seduce him into my Novella where he shall live a flat pre-determined existence forever :]
Oh, you are so cruel! All you girls are just like that! Yes, we end up succumbing to your charms and accept the tedium of the hum-drum life of heart and home. But, any day now, I’m gonna do the Gauguin thing and cut off my ear, move to Haiti, and consort with native girls for the remaining 9 years of my biblically alloted “three score and ten.” Oh, well…I think I’ll forgo that surgical maneuver though….
footrubs, chocolates? I can get those from my girls friends – viscera is good
awe yes yes
Got to get him into your life, Ginger, even if he is visceral…rather a turn off.
At some point and time we are all visceral. You wouldn’t be happy with a man who was dry with only intellect and wit. As pointed out above you could get this from a girl-friend. However I warn against stunning good looks as this is most often accompanied by other sins such as pride, distain, selfishness and, a probable distain for your beauty both inner and outer. Duump him!
sounds like that could be me, on the surface I can seem intelligent and non-emotional at times but deep down thats where I lie my hat
I am newly inspired by your posts. Thank you, I love your work
Thanks thanks
Viscerally driven is intriguing…yes.
A sharped dressed man will spit a silver tongue as slick as the grease in their hair.
HA HA HA lol oh my
Very nice!
It is hard to snuggle up with intellect and wit in bed at night. A bit of the visceral can’t hurt…
I nominated you for the dragons loyality award. Please see my post on it.
Thank you
Coco, I just subscribed! You are incredible! I don’t know how you came by that kind of “stuff” in your heart at such a tender young age. Keep it up.
You are amazing! I simply love your work.
I really appreciate you.
Very nice…
Sweet heavens I enjoyed reading that.