I sail
November 27, 2012 § 17 Comments
So strange, so sad
feelings come, then they sail.
I say goodbye, I hold head high.
I won’t dip low [the way i did with him]
I won’t give in [the way i did with him]
I won’t break open [the way i did with him]
I won’t be hurt [the way i did with him]
But you are not him,
and you are here…
Love, ocean and boats. My three favorite subjects. A excellent poem.
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me too, thanks. i took the pic in Hilton Head. so pretty there!
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This is beautifully written. Head high – heart in hell . What an ending. I can totally hear a sad soundtrack as this ends. nice piece.
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Very powerful writing. I was moved by your words.
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very effective coco. last two words is all about the journey as I see it.
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strike again coco..haha. it let me remember of a sailor’s story.
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Happy sailing.
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rocking of emotions here and there~ clearly the characteristic of the oceans, calm at times, others, rough
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Reblogged this on Eliza Shane and commented:
Coco’s verses never fail to touch my heart.
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I keep returning because I can’t help it 🙂 I don’t know what to say other than you’re writing is a pleasure to read. I enjoy spoken word, and I couldn’t help but read this with a certain rhythm in my voice.
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Sometimes when you write, it is like you say what is in my heart. Keep writing. I love your posts.
-gabby
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You are so kind. Thank you Gabby. CHEERS!
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Coco , I just luv reading your posts , just luv it 🙂
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You’re so kind, and thank you for your emails. So glad you have started writing. Cheers darling!
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Coco , You make me Smile ………..Hugs , hugs n hugs 🙂
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You make me smile. Hugs upon hugs upon hugs back!!
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Oh “pridefully bad”. How clever!
Should I feel bad that it made me feel good when it’s supposed to be a sad poem? *confused but happy*
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