This poem is sad and wistful. It speaks of the heartache and the regret that we all feel when we find the years have long passed. It is a very good poem, in that sense, but…
I wouldn’t wish anyone to write a poem such as this. Then again, I may be taking the subject matter too seriously. I do that far too often. lol.
Revisiting-
Only five years or is it millennia-you were a young writer, and I, your new, young reader, but She is always the same; steadfast and skittish, reliable yet relentless. Not mere regret; She leaves longing in her wake; She draws me along and I know you are composing there, not far ahead . . .
Hugs and blessings,
L<
I wonder why is it that we realise the true worth of things in hindsight, and not so much as and when they are happening. I mean this happens with people all the time right ?
Beautiful words. 🙂
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This poem is sad and wistful. It speaks of the heartache and the regret that we all feel when we find the years have long passed. It is a very good poem, in that sense, but…
I wouldn’t wish anyone to write a poem such as this. Then again, I may be taking the subject matter too seriously. I do that far too often. lol.
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Reblogged this on nicrt(s); untypical.
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U. R. incredible!
This is an absolutely delicious piece of work!!!
It’s so universal….
So personal…..
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Revisiting-
Only five years or is it millennia-you were a young writer, and I, your new, young reader, but She is always the same; steadfast and skittish, reliable yet relentless. Not mere regret; She leaves longing in her wake; She draws me along and I know you are composing there, not far ahead . . .
Hugs and blessings,
L<
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Awe you are ever wonderful.. thank you for your uplifting words of praise and prayers. Hugs back.
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It’s no wonder we follow your blog Miss Coco Ginger Pops 🙂
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I love this
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Speaks of everyone’s regret
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mysterious – time flies and important things and people have flown with it.
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Very haunting
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Very cool picture!
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Can I share this on my FB page?
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Of course:)
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I wonder why is it that we realise the true worth of things in hindsight, and not so much as and when they are happening. I mean this happens with people all the time right ?
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Beautiful.
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This is true. Time is never forgiving.
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so sad
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Amazing expression of a nearly universal sentiment….
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It seems like everything you write is so profound and so beautiful. Are you published?
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