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Poems and stories of love & heartbreak.
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Poems and stories of love & heartbreak.
November 7, 2013 § 14 Comments
Tagged: adventure, art, artist, author, blogger, breakups, broken heart, dating, good morning, Journaling, love, poet, Poetry, quotes, relationships, short story, Traveling, writer, writers world, writing
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Coco J. Ginger Says
And what a realization that is! Well-penned. 🙂
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I need a minute to process that haha!
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In other words you’re stuck!! Hate that feeling.
xxx
Safa
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Very thought provoking and true!
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How about explaining this one? lol No, really.
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haha alright, which part?
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All parts. How could she have traveled, if he was the only one who had traveled. This one’s not for the literal-minded reader. Can you explain it? What’s going on?
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Everywhere she traveled, she brought him with her in her heart and mind. So although her body left physically, her heart stayed with him. In the end, the only one who had gone anywhere, was he. Bc his heart had traveled, and left hers long before.
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Thank you. Makes more sense now, but I still have to think on the last line. Too late to think tonight, so I’ll say goodnight, and try to appreciate the ending tomorrow. Again, thanks for your explanation. 🙂
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Very well written! Sharp.
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Sweet! I enjoyed it. 🙂
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I love these shorter works of poetry. This one was really said a lot in a few words.
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Good morning! Okay, so now the ending is acceptable. Puzzles–that’s what defines good poetry. Keep writing!
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This could be the story of women, everywhere…
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