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Poems and stories of love & heartbreak.
December 2, 2013 § 90 Comments
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Fabulous photo
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Sad. Good photo. Can you write a poem with the same photo but with a happy ending? A happy subject? If so, then you are a poet!
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I am sure she can. If she wrote this poem she is a poet.
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Yes, of course, she is a poet. A good one.This is a great poem. But how much greater the poet who can bring out other meanings from the exceptional photo displayed here. My comment was merely a challenge.
for Coco.A compliment, really. Thanks for your comment.
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Challenge accepted. :]
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Looking forward to it!! You will do a great job!
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Reblogged this on The ObamaCrat™.
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I love it! You really outdid yourself with this poem coco.
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Great photo too. Inspired…
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Haunting
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You took the words right out of my mouth tyroper!
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Such depth and power and meaning and emotion — expressed with such an amazing economy of words. No, my dear, you are NOT a poet! That label is much, much too . . . ‘small’ for you. You Are, quite simply — and magnificently — a MASTER!. . . . 🙂
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Oh to be immortal!
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A beautiful wish it must be 🙂
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oh Coco be careful what you mostly wish for…
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Wouldn’t have used the word “die” if it hadn’t rhymed
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oh you’re not talking your real feelings just being dramatic in prose,ok. He left less convinced then when he arrived…L
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Nicely played.
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ah but Coco you’re still the best and the prettiest too…
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hmmm made me sad to think how love can break our hearts and that death is the only thing that erases this…
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I know. Succinctly and neatly summarized.
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Really nice and what a beautiful photograph too, it is so captivating.
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I can relate to this so much. Opposite emotions, yet both are being felt at the same time. Profound. Thank you for sharing.
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love the photo. Provocative. Please take a look at “The Tile of Being Present.” http://lifesmissingpieces.wordpress.com/2013/12/10/the-tile-of-being-present/
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Ima sorry, I just don’t get it. Must be a left brain/right brain thang.
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You certainly enticed the readers of your poem with your picture. Well done.
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Reblogged this on Cornelius Okumu's WordPress Blog and commented:
inspriting
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Reblogged this on Thoughts of a Frogprincess.
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Amazing image
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Edna St. Vincent Millay has been my favorite poet since I was 16 years old. I think you may be my second favorite.
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That is such a compliment. Xxo
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Beautiful combination of image and words.
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Great poem. I like poetry that says it all in just a few words. You did that!
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This poem is so chilling. Literally, shivers ran down both my arms as I read this!
What power resides behind so few words.
A brilliant poem!
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Hitting the nail on the head seems to be your specialty.
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You’re Wonderful!!!!
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so succinct, so laconic. says so much in just a handful of words. loved it. congratulations on being freshly pressed. oh, by the way, a very sweet picture 🙂
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I like this blog, Thank you very much for sharing
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Love your poem, such beauty, check my story here please http://ilostmyego.wordpress.com/2013/12/09/life-bizarre/
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10 points to Coco
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awesome play of words and with that pic…it connects!
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This is what I want to learn; to say so little and yet mean so much. This poem embodies that. Good work
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Beautiful words and lovely photo.
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Reblogged this on hanagirlmaui.
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I hope your wish comes true for you! Let us know!
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Beautiful!
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Reblogged this on Buppha Witt and commented:
Love this blog!
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Love it!
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Reblogged this on If I was Abby and commented:
My thoughts exactly
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Very intriguing.
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Such a powerful image and poem. Beautifully written.
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A modern twist on the form, and I like it. I had an old poet friend who once said that hitching haiku together like this makes you a hitch-haiku-er. 😉
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Intellectual..
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Very nice Coco. Wishes do come true you know.. 🙂
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so cordially
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Reblogged this on J.Walker.
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Beautifully concise
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….until we meet again. enticing picture and challenging sentiments.
love your economy.
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Well done. Great imagery.
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Coco, thanks for subscribing to my blog! This is a gutsy poem in all its simplicity… At first, my thoughts were of an abusive father (perhaps because I had one…), and then I dwelt more on the idea of a romance in the tricky stages. The little girl was a compelling argument for the former… Haunting. Thanks, Amy
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Reblogged this on blog.
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Reblogged this on tot123itsme.
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I like it.. I like it.. I love it..
Thatz the best part of being a poet.. Length and depth of words don’t define the feelings…..
You said, it so perfectly, which leaves readers so much to think about..
I really liked it…
Thanks a lot for sharing your short but deep write ^-^
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Love this. Girl you.can be expressive with only a few words. Talent.
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Just…beautiful.
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interesting.
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Reblogged this on bluebellspring.
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hauntingly beautiful…well done.
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Whenever I read this I can totally feel connected to the pic u chose for the start. Very good choice of words too indeed
Short but strong
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Beautiful and haunting
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nice image
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I liked the photo and it remembered me my childhood , Thank you for sharing
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What a lovely, wistful photograph. The words accompany it so very well.
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Reblogged this on thisoldtoadblog.
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This is one of the best short poems I’ve ever read! So much emotion in a short poem.
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Thank you so much!
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hmm
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I like this poem.
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Haunting image, is that your work? Love it!
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Reblogged this on Avant-garde Coach and commented:
I need to be true about empowering friendship, love and loyalty. When I read this poem, it gave me goose bumps.
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Awesome photo, awesome poem! It was short, but really made me think! 🙂
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I love the poem. its short but deep.
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