Revenge
April 2, 2014 § 12 Comments
It took three years and seven nights
To find words to destroy him—
Finally, revenge would be mine.
I opened my mouth at just the right time
Pulled out my tongue
With the script in my mind.
And just as the words
were lined up to get dropped
My tongue caught stage-fright
and instead my heart spoke
This is lovely
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I love that line “Then my thinks left my brain”
Great stuff!
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Thanks Mark 😉
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BEAUTIFUL!!! ‘…and my ‘feels’ entered to take me where I always wanted to BE anyway’ 😉
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aww yes yes yes
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“And just as the words
were lined up to get dropped
My tongue caught stage-fright
and instead my heart spoke”
whooshhh wow. that really hit me, thank you for this!
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This is wonderful!
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One of the most beautiful poems I’ve seen from you. Amazing job.
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That one was a surprise!
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:O
Totally surprising but beautiful twist
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Simply amazing…..the twist is just so good and very sweet *_*
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Aww! ❤
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