Very powerful. A definite loneliness in the beginning, completed with a power stance.
I find it leaves me wanting more, though. More details, more story. The image alone has so much to it that i could give to a thousand words, as they say.
I like this. The photo tells much of what you say. Then your ending upstages it. Thanks for visiting my blog and following me. I look forward to reading more of your posts.
Wonderfully perspicacious — and brutally Truth-full. I bow to your artistry, fellow Front Pager . . . . 😉
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Very powerful. A definite loneliness in the beginning, completed with a power stance.
I find it leaves me wanting more, though. More details, more story. The image alone has so much to it that i could give to a thousand words, as they say.
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This flowed like a river
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Reblogged this on In Feneba's Eyes.
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Coco thank you for the high five my triumph quote!
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…feeling the beauty and frustration of poetry. I enjoyed this very much.
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Awesome. “Your money is cheap so you give it away” is one of the best lines I can remember reading in a long time, and I’ve been reading a lot lately!
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That is such a compliment coming from you.
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Thank you so much for liking my poem on WordMusic. Coming from another poet, it is a great compliment.
Brent
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Mostly it’s been said, but I also like it’s spunk. The whole thing is great. We’ll read you more later.
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I like this. The photo tells much of what you say. Then your ending upstages it. Thanks for visiting my blog and following me. I look forward to reading more of your posts.
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